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Main Topic: Problem Solving in Your Novel (and your life!)
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Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
started thinking about decluttering on a serious level - starting with my office (Valerie) writing, finishing things (multiple manuscripts), balancing work and work. ;-) (Erick)What are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Year of the Puppy (Alexandra Horowitz) ; Once There Were Wolves Charlotte McConaghy; The Teller of Small Fortunes Julie Leong The Desire Map (Danielle LaPorte) Start Thinking Rich by Brad Klontz and Adrian Brambila Erick: Hampton Heights by Dan Kois; The Eyre Affair Jasper Fforde; The Boy From the Woods Harlan Coben Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: Otter.io FABULOUS. Transcription software. $60/year. Tidbit #2: Wheel of Life. Rank your categories. Friends and Family, Significant Other, Personal Growth, Fun and Leisure, Home Environment, Career, Money, Health. Understand what areas need improvement, what areas are being neglected, and start to create balance. What can be worked on next? What needs to happen for the number to increase? Tidbit #3: Mental Wealth vs Mental Health. (SAD, anxiety, etc) Almost every book I read now talks about sleep as being the #1 thing for overall health. Wake up every day at same time. (Josh's ADHD/insomnia story). I'm trying it. But changing my time to later. You know I've been taking that Magic Mind performance shot (still am). I was reading a little bit more about their company--they ship internationally so I'll be able to get it in CR.--and they've got these pillars of mental wealth: Sleep. Diet. Exercise. Stress Management. Exogenous Compounds (something created outside of the body): antibiotics, herbal supplements, cigarette smoke, diet, wildfire smoke, etc.I'm doing a lot of work already in most of the pillars .... But sleep. The last thing I work on is listed first. Magic Mind has a new mental wealth challenge going on their website, and they've packaged up their mental performance shots (which I'm still drinking in the morning with my coffee and happy lite), along with (for the first time) Sleep Shots. And I've got a link for 45% off in the show notes, of course. So yeah. Sleep. That's one of my 2025 resolutions. And my tidbit. Also, I may be weird, but I don't like naps. So I've really got to get my sleep in order. Segment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check):Segment 4 (Main Topic): Problem Solving in Your Novel (and your life!)
GROW: Goals, Resources, Obstacles, Way Forward (Use Tarot for this too!)
(author and for character)
1. Something is not right here. Skill to develop. "In service of the story."
2. GROW method.
3. Take the character out of the problem spots in the novel. It's me (the author). "Why are we here? Why did I bring us to this scene?" Transitions and staging. (What is happening between the scenes that I want the reader to know that I'm not writing?)
4. Character Motivation. Mini motivations in service to the bigger motivation.
5. Master class in long term story: Breaking Bad.
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Main Topic: End of Year Review
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Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
Bookstore work, Ali's oral surgery, helping son. (Valerie) working/writing (Erick)What are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Year of the Puppy (Alexandra Horowitz) ; The Desire Map (Danielle LaPorte) Start Thinking Rich by Brad Klontz and Adrian Brambila Erick: Hampton Heights by Dan Kois Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: hidden organizations; Wordcrafters; Astoria Writers Guild; Read the newsletters! See what others are doing. Tidbit #2: Still loving the Magic Mind. Buying a subscription today. So, if you want to try it out, I have a discount code for you. It's for 20% off a one-time purchase, or they have a subscription service, and the code is good for 48% off that. You can go to MagicMind.com/Valerie20 and use the code VALERIE20 to check it out. I'll put the link in the show notes.Segment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check):
Segment 4 (Main Topic):
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Main Topic: Self-Doubt
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Embracing mistakes and self-doubt. Accept they are real, most accomplished people have it and figure out how to work through it.
Where does it show up? When the world is moving too fast (v) Doing routine things (e) (fear of unexpected unexpectedly happening)
What works: Training? Reframing?
Elizabeth Gilbert (Big Magic) talks about allowing fear in the car with you, but not allowing it to drive.
Tips:
Getting over it is an illusion. Get over it in the moment instead. (On the way to a client, think about seeing a friend. And maybe they are feeling self-doubt. You aren't alone.)
"Please help me to say the thing they need to hear."
Is the job description creating the self-doubt?
Talk to self-doubt out loud.
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Main Topic: Pricing for Author Services (starts at 16:33)
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Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
EMBODY (fit and intuitive) on Patreon. (Valerie) writing new short stories from Ghost Story Weekend inspiration (Erick) (got feedback from the participants; all loved it.) tying up loose endings (finishing energy at the end of the year); clean slate for my birthday. (Erick) Jan 23rd re-thinking Patreon (Erick)What are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Year of the Puppy (Alexandra Horowitz); A Happy Pocketful of Money (David Cameron Gikandi) The Ministry of Time by Kaliane Bradley; Be Ready When Luck Happens Ina Garten Erick: The October Country (Ray Bradbury)(Shout out to local bookstore: Parallel Worlds; NE Portland, OR); Flight of Icarus (Stranger Things prequel book)(Caitlin Schneiderhan) Tom Clancy: Shadow State Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: Brandon McNulty YouTube channel (craft of writing and story) Tidbit #2: talking with a friendSegment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check):
Segment 4 (Main Topic): Pricing
Epiphany on pricing (E) What we charge for service.
Gig pricing. Are you a fit? What's the work going to be? What charge for project? How much am I (cost) to pay for this?
"What is your budget for this?"
The Dance:
Components of pricing:
Standard pricing:
"Dynamic" pricing (sliding scale in head):
Base line $1/word $7.50/pg.
Standard jobs don't exist.
Editorial rates linked out.
Write in contact: opt-out cause, renegotiate prices.
Rapport, base line (and how much flex on it), build in protection to self.
AI clause in contract?
The scope of work is this:..... If the scope changes during the course of project, we shall renegotiate the contract (including pricing).
Learn how to talk about money and value yourself.
Review each project. Ideal? What went wrong? Did more work than I got paid for?
Interview client when done for testimonials (social proof is enormous).
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Hello Writers and Crafters!
I'm Valerie Ihsan, And I'm Erick Mertz, and this is Episode 171 of the podcast and it's November 20, 2024 as we record this.
Main Topic:
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Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
(Accidental Stranger Book 2 out) Print out NOW! On Amazon. https://wordcrafters.org/unlock-the-heart-of-your-memoir/ (Valerie's teaching a class in Eugene, Oregon on Saturday, December 7, 2024; 10am-5pm.) EMBODY (fit and intuitive) on Patreon. (Valerie) writing new short stories from Ghost Story Weekend inspiration (Erick) (got feedback from the participants; all loved it.) tying up loose endings (finishing energy at the end of the year); clean slate for my birthday. (Erick) re-thinking Patreon (Erick)What are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Year of the Puppy (Alexandra Horowitz); A Happy Pocketful of Money (David Cameron Gikandi) Erick: The October Country (Ray Bradbury)(Shout out to local bookstore: Parallel Worlds; NE Portland, OR); Flight of Icarus (Stranger Things prequel book)(Caitlin Schneiderhan) Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: Jane Friedman's newsletter The Hot Sheet, amazing information (fundamental) Tidbit #2:Segment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check):
Segment 4 (Main Topic):
Start with a character, What's your story? (Valerie)
archetypes intrigue/attrack me and do something different than before. (Erick)
theme early on (V);
why this character, why now (E); element of surprise makes it interesting (E); be open to surprise; fully plot out after the brainstorming. Create a structure and continue to pants through it. Invent a thing on the way to something else. Plotting isn't boring. Defy the plot points. If char reacts to a stale moments, it's because you are stale and bored. When stuck (process changes), a day-to-day thing: toss it out if you are rewriting it too much. What are the necessary elements? Straight-forward way. "The scene actually begins here." If it's content and not story, it has to go. Keep changing the container as you right. Know the beats before you sit down. (Erick)
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Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
(Accidental Stranger Book 2 out) Print out NOW! On Amazon. Write in the Harbor (Erick teaching.) (Valerie will be at Write in the Harbor in Gig Harbor, WA this year, too! back from Ghost Story Weekend in Rainbow, OR. (Erick) https://wordcrafters.org/unlock-the-heart-of-your-memoir/ (Valerie's teaching a class in Eugene, Oregon on Saturday, December 7, 2024; 10am-5pm.) EMBODY (fit and intuitive) on Patreon. writing new short stories from Ghost Story Weekend inspiration (Erick) re-thinking Patreon (Erick) (Anne) first book published in April (She Writes Press); next book on September 2025; writing third book; social media IG went viral just from showing off apartment. Tip: do videos/reels.What are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Year of the Puppy (Alexandra Horowitz) Roland Rogers isn't Dead Yet (Samantha Allen); A Happy Pocketful of Money (David Cameron Gikandi) Erick: The October Country (Ray Bradbury) The Great When (Alan Moore) (Shout out to local bookstore: Parallel Worlds; NE Portland, OR); Safe Enough (Lee Child) Anne: The Wedding People (Alison Espach); I Hope This Finds You Well (Natalie Sue) Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: Tidbit #2:Segment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check):
Segment 4 (Main Topic):
Anne Abel
Anne Abel’s story about unwittingly rescuing an aggressive dog, Milo, won a Moth StorySLAM in New York City. She has won two additional Moth StorySLAMs in Chicago. Her credentials include an MFA from The New School for Social Research, an MBA from the University of Chicago, and a BS in chemical engineering from Tufts University. She has freelanced for Lilith; Philadelphia Daily News; The Jewish Exponent; Philadelphia Weekly, Main Line Life and Main Line Today, and formerly wrote a weekly column, “The Homefront,” for Main Line Welcomat. She also taught English and creative writing at the Community College of Philadelphia. Anne lives in New York City with her husband, Andy, and their three rescue dogs, Ryan, Megan, and Chase. She grew up outside Boston, MA.
Suffered from depression and writers block, and start telling stories is what saved her. Following Bruce Springsteen's tour for the structure.
Started writing stories through emails for hours a day.
Storytelling open mic. Worked on seven minute story. 7 minute story framework. MOTH is 5 minutes.
Don't question what comes out.
Positive immediate feedback.
Use story beats. Outline.
Tell myself the story over and over. (Absolute key points.) (Tell them what they don't expect.)
Everyone sees art in a different way.
If Bruce Springsteen was saying, "How do we get through the day?" maybe I can do this.
Australia changed the trajectory of my life.
Blinded by the Light. (Movie about a British-Pakastani teen who discovers Bruce Springsteen's music.)
A lot of courage and connection. The courage led to the connectivity.
"I live outside my comfort zone."
She tried and she tried and she tried. (For my tombstone.)
"I don't let fear stop me."
"What's the worst? Just do it."
anneabelauthor.com (Listen to a couple of Anne's stories from the MOTHSlam.)
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Main Topic: Writing as a Black Woman in the Speculative Fiction World (Main Topic starts at 28:00.)
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Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
(Accidental Stranger Book 2 out) Print out NOW! On Amazon. Write in the Harbor (Erick teaching.) (Valerie will be at Write in the Harbor in Gig Harbor, WA this year, too! back from Ghost Story Weekend in Rainbow, OR. (Erick) https://wordcrafters.org/unlock-the-heart-of-your-memoir/ (Valerie's teaching a class in Eugene, Oregon on Saturday, December 7, 2024; 10am-5pm.) EMBODY (fit and intuitive) on Patreon. Michele: teaching at NC Writers Network Conference "Bending Reality" (Keynotes: art and creativity unifies and grounds us; What is your Zone of Genius? Create a keynote talk from there.) Book rec: The Big Leap (Hendricks); teaching "Afro-Futurism and the Black Imaginary" classWhat are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Year of the Puppy (Alexandra Horowitz) Roland Rogers isn't Dead Yet (Samantha Allen); A Happy Pocketful of Money (David Cameron Gikandi) Erick: The October Country (Ray Bradbury) The Great When (Alan Moore) (Shout out to local bookstore: Parallel Worlds; NE Portland, OR) Michele: Nalo Hopkinson (Jamaica Ginger and Other Concoctions); How to Be Old (Lyn Slater) Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: Invite the Random into your Storytelling. (Roll the dice.)Tidbit #2: Eat fries before dinner.
Segment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check):
Segment 4 (Main Topic):
Dr. Michele Tracy Berger is a professor, an award-winning writer, a creativity coach and a pug-lover. Her main love is writing speculative fiction, though she also is known to write poetry and creative nonfiction, too.
1. Spec fiction definition: ideas that are outside the regular laws of the universe; Margaret Atwood (feminist author used ); sci fi, fantasy, paranormal, horror. Toni Morrison's Beloved is a ghost story (literary). Horror is a feeling (also a genre) (elevated horror, social horror). In social horror, Creatives of Color now write systems of power as the monster in the basement.
2. What challenges do you face? Meet reader's expectations; gatekeepers have changed; a decade of rejections for Doll Seed story; understanding African American literary history (more space now, public ready now for more interesting characters); black women were absent or monstrous in horror media from the 70s and 80s, now there's interest in a rebalance, and an appetite for complex characters, indie pubbing lead the way for this. Trad pub catching up.
"This May Hurt a Bit" (horror podcast)
3. Marketing through this lens: finding a press that resonates with you, being authentic and consistent, IG Live, learning as you go, embrace the work of marketer, watch documentary of Jackie Collins (Lady Boss: The Jackie Collins Story) and Harlan Ellison (Dreams with Sharp Teeth: A Film About a GrandMaster), writers have always had to think about how people find them.
Aunt Lute Press: mood board with intersection of empowered female characters, black readers of spec fiction, how to think about ideal reader ("If you like Octavia Butler, Kelly Link, AND Dean Koontz, you'll love Michele Tracy Berger").
Start with a character, then construct the story and follow the character through. Think about audience in the submission process.
4. Author services:
Write affirmations. Neutral to positive self-talk for writers as a pattern interruptor.
Coaching creatives for 15 years. The Creative Tickle. "Tickle your genius awake."
Specialize in writers interested in mindset work. Online classes. Group coaching.
"More Joy on the Path."
"See the joy in the process."
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Resources:
"How to write an eavesdropping scene" on Erick's blog
Reading Critique Group for Writers FB Group (Jennie Komp's group)
3 Bird View FB page (Jennie Komp's business page)
Author XP (marketing for authors) (bi-monthly promotions)
Raven Publicity (publicity for authors)
The Shades of Orange (Rachel, Book Blogger on YouTube) for book recommendations SF/Fantasy/Horror
Contact Erick for business-starting advice or building a website.
Contact Valerie for author coaching.
Thomas Umstattd Jr, at Novel Marketing Podcast. Ep255: How to Create an Email Onboarding Drip Campaign
Russell P. Nohelty and Monica Leonelle's book, Get Your Book Selling on Kickstarter.
Balance meditation app.
Story Rubric version 1.1 and podcast episode. Three Story Method worksheetBook Recs for writing/creativity/business:
Thinking in Pictures by John Sayles Take Off Your Pants: Outline Your Books for Faster, Better Writing by Libbie Hawker Story Hypothesis: A Writer's Guide to Crafting Resonating Stories by JP Rindfleisch IX Fast-Draft Your Memoir: Write Your Life Story in 45 Hours by Rachael Herron Three Story Method: Foundations in Fiction by J.Thorn and Zach Bohannon The Anatomy of a Best Seller by Sacha Black Slow Productivity by Cal Newport -
Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
(Accidental Stranger Book 2 out) Print out NOW! On Amazon. Write in the Harbor (Erick teaching.) (Valerie will be at Write in the Harbor in Gig Harbor, WA this year, too! Host of Ghost Story Weekend for Wordcrafters. (Erick) print books going forward. wrapping up writing projects, PB out on the 15th of Accidental Stranger (plus prequel), finishing another book in Melville series "Signal Shadow" (Erick) https://wordcrafters.org/unlock-the-heart-of-your-memoir/ (Valerie's teaching a class in Eugene, Oregon on Saturday, December 7, 2024; 10am-5pm.)What are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Year of the Puppy (Alexandra Horowitz) Erick: The October Country (Ray Bradbury) The Great When (Alan Moore) (Shout out to local bookstore: Parallel Worlds; NE Portland, OR) Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: Knowing Your Boundaries in Your Work (Erick(Tidbit #2: Exercise Gives You Energy (Valerie)
Segment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check):
Segment 4 (Main Topic): Foster Curiosity:
*moment of inspiration comes
what do you do when you get the idea?
don't memorialize the idea too fast (set in stone), instead, live with it. See how long I can tease it out.
Practice keeping the idea flowing. Live in the possible for as long as I can. Gather the what ifs.
Then download the ideas. Lose some of the ideas, but learned to trust the leaves that fall off.
Learn by playing. See yourself in the story and feel bigger.
Usually happens when not at home.
Next episode: Guest Michelle Berger Tracy on Being a Black Woman in the Speculative Fiction
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Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
(Accidental Stranger Book 2 out) Print out NOW! On Amazon. Write in the Harbor (Erick teaching.) (Valerie will be at Write in the Harbor in Gig Harbor, WA this year, too! Host of Ghost Story Weekend for Wordcrafters. (Erick) print books going forward. wrapping up writing projects, PB out on the 15th of Accidental Stranger (plus prequel), finishing another book in Melville series "Signal Shadow" (Erick) met my client deadline, squeezed in some self-care, worked an extra shift at the bookstore, a lot of social time with my son and various friends (catching up), used ChatGPT4yo to help with a workshop description I needed to turn in--their name is Echo, signed up for a 14-day trial Class Pass and signed up for something almost every day. I'm both excited and dreading it. (Valerie)What are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Book of Witching (CJ Cooke) Erick: The October Country (Ray Bradbury) The Great When (Alan Moore) Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: Squibler (AI for Writers); tool for outline ideas, for plot holes, idea generator, lets you save things in files.Tidbit #2: If you aren't an early adopter (I'm not?), then start using A.I. as you need it. We're all creative. We can find creative ways of using it in our business. Starting using it with Pro-Writing Aid (affiliate link in the show notes), or using the free version of ChatGPT to get copywriting done. Like book blurbs, ad copy, workshop descriptions, sometimes you can even get a book summary if it's an older book. Finding book comps. My A.I. Assistant is super nice.
Segment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check):
Segment 4 (Main Topic): Starts at 19:14 on the video.
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Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
(Accidental Stranger Book 2 out) Write in the Harbor (Erick teaching.) (Valerie will be at Write in the Harbor in Gig Harbor, WA this year, too! Host of Ghost Story Weekend for Wordcrafters. (Erick) wrapping up writing projects, PB out on the 15th of Accidental Stranger (plus prequel), finishing another book in Melville series "Signal Shadow" (Erick) client work (Valerie)What are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Life Impossible (Matt Haig) The Book of Witching (CJ Cooke) Erick: The Color of Magic (Terry Pratchett) The October Country (Ray Bradbury) Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: Locus magazine (sci/fi and fantasy) FANTASTICTidbit #2: Query Manager (filtering, but not totally accurate--check the agent's website)
Segment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check): A previous guest said Erick and I reminded her of being on a morning radio show. I brought up the sitcom "Community," with the "Troy and Abed in the morning" tagline, and CRICKETS. Ha! Here's what I mean: https://images.app.goo.gl/rG9fff2Xko9PSAQMA
Segment 4 (Main Topic): Starts at 20:40
Can nudge an agent about submission after 6-8 weeks.
Why are you going?
Networking, learning something, building relationships, clients, creating community, make fans, building confidence,
"If you plant bulbs today, you get flowers in May."
Why don't they reach out?
Conference Buddy
Set Boundaries for yourself, and be aware of other's boundaries.
Need for brevity in questions, pitches, and elevator pitches.
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Main Topic: Jeanne Blasberg, Story Retellings (starts at 21:39 on video)
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Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
(Accidental Stranger Book 2 out) SWWC and Write in the Harbor (Erick teaching.) (Valerie will be at Write in the Harbor in Gig Harbor, WA this year, too! And also speaking at Alaska Writers Guild conference in Anchorage in October.) Host of Ghost Story Weekend for Wordcrafters. (Erick) writing, working on print version of Accidental Stranger, rewriting next Strange Air novel, client biz. (Erick) client work, getting ready for conference next weekend. (Valerie)What are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Horse (Willy Vlautin); We Should All Be Millionaires: A Woman's Guide to Earning More, Building Wealth, and Gaining Economic Power (Rachel Rodgers) Erick: The United States of Cryptids: A Tour of American Myths and Monsters (J.W. Ocker)Jeanne Blasberg's reads:
Land Rich, Cash Poor: My Family's Hope and the Untold History of the Disappearing American Farmer (Brian Reisinger)
Entitlement (Rumaan Alam)
Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: Six-Week Writing From Your Body workshop (author Anna Willman)--starts September 28 -- $40 per session or discounted rate for all six. They always work with individuals to make their workshops accessible to all. Focusinginternational.org Writing from your body FII workshopTidbit #2: Squibler (new writing organizer); Knowing what your boundaries are is key. I get to say what I do.
Tidbit #3: Chris Frizzell (Frizz Lit) Book club of the classic, chapter by chapter, funny host
Segment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check):
Segment 4 (Main Topic): Jeanne Blasberg is an award-winning and bestselling author and essayist. Her novel The Nine (SWP 2019) was honored with the 2019 Foreword Indies Gold Award in Thriller & Suspense and the Gold Medal and Juror’s Choice in the 2019 National Indie Excellence Awards. Eden (SWP 2017), her debut, won the Benjamin Franklin Silver Award for Best New Voice in Fiction and was a finalist for the Sarton Women’s Book Award for Historical Fiction. Her forthcoming novel, Daughter of a Promise (SWP, April 2, 2024) is a modern retelling of the legend of David and Bathsheba, completing the thematic trilogy she began with Eden and The Nine.
Jeanne cochairs the board of the Boston Book Festival and serves on the Executive Committee of GrubStreet, one of the country’s preeminent creative writing centers. Jeanne was named a Southampton Writer’s Conference BookEnds Fellow in April 2021. She reviews contemporary fiction for the New York Journal of Books, When not in New England, she splits her time between Park City, UT, and growing organic vegetables in Verona, Wisconsin.
Jeanne Blasberg
Daughter of a Promise
Retellings: def -- not side story (that's its own genre) -- have the events from the original tellings (same or parallel); reimagined in different setting; make things contemporary and relevant. Not a 'diss' on the original. Opportunity to retell is a fun journey for reader and author. Plots are familiar (off-beat romance, forbidden relationship, etc), can insert or end story at a different point. In conversation with other works.
Only so many plots, we process our lives with story. Not derivative.
Our human struggle has really never changed. The setting has, but universal truths haven't. As a species, have we really made much progress?
Take plot, make modern day, explore the relationships.
Do the research of retellings (all) already written first. Find what hasn't been said. Why are you telling this version? What questions exist? Why are you driven to write about it?
Follow your why's? What story has you still thinking about it? Follow your curiosity. This is the ultimate fan fiction. What are you obsessed with?
What are you wanting to say with this retelling?
"Inspired by" -- have permission to make these stories our own.
Insert our own thoughts and conversation with this art.
Art evolves this way. Museums hold many variations of the Virgin Mary. For instance.
License to play with it.
What about exposing yourself to the "scholars" and experts response?
Interest and curiosity is the response. Tip: Don't feel like anything is out of bounds for you. Just do it well. You are allowed to do it. If it lights you up, I think you should do it.
If you've triggered someone, clearly you've done it right.
@jeanneblasbergauthor
Constantly Curating on Substack (writing and farming)
Sonic Branding (link TBD)
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Resources:
"How to write an eavesdropping scene" on Erick's blog
Reading Critique Group for Writers FB Group (Jennie Komp's group)
3 Bird View FB page (Jennie Komp's business page)
Author XP (marketing for authors) (bi-monthly promotions)
Raven Publicity (publicity for authors)
The Shades of Orange (Rachel, Book Blogger on YouTube) for book recommendations SF/Fantasy/Horror
Contact Erick for business-starting advice or building a website.
Contact Valerie for author coaching.
Thomas Umstattd Jr, at Novel Marketing Podcast. Ep255: How to Create an Email Onboarding Drip Campaign
Russell P. Nohelty and Monica Leonelle's book, Get Your Book Selling on Kickstarter.
Balance meditation app.
Story Rubric version 1.1 and podcast episode. Three Story Method worksheetBook Recs for writing/creativity/business:
Thinking in Pictures by John Sayles Take Off Your Pants: Outline Your Books for Faster, Better Writing by Libbie Hawker Story Hypothesis: A Writer's Guide to Crafting Resonating Stories by JP Rindfleisch IX Fast-Draft Your Memoir: Write Your Life Story in 45 Hours by Rachael Herron Three Story Method: Foundations in Fiction by J.Thorn and Zach Bohannon The Anatomy of a Best Seller by Sacha Black Slow Productivity by Cal Newport -
Main Topic: Welcome to Season 5
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Segment 1 (Announcements/Author Updates):
Three Story Method: Writing How-To Books out now. Focus and Finish: Goal-Setting and Strategic Planning for Writers (First in Series; out now.) Black Springs Saga Book 1 out now (it's the prequel) 99 cents (Accidental Stranger Book 2 preorder this coming week) SWWC and Write in the Harbor (Erick teaching.) (Valerie will be at Write in the Harbor in Gig Harbor, WA this year, too! And also speaking at Alaska Writers Guild conference in Anchorage in October.) Host of Ghost Story Weekend for Wordcrafters. (Erick) submitting stories, client biz, new ad campaign. Working on next novel. (Erick) finishing 2024 retreat (Valerie) upcoming: courses, new novel (Valerie)What are you reading?
Valerie: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman; The Horse (Willy Vlautin) The Universe Has Your Back (Gabrielle Bernstein) Erick: The Tusks of Extinction (Ray Nayler), The Glass Hotel (Emily St. John Mandel) Segment 2 (Resources/Tips/Tidbits): Tidbit #1: Six-Week Writing From Your Body workshop (author Anna Willman)--starts September 28 -- $40 per session or discounted rate for all six. They always work with individuals to make their workshops accessible to all. Focusinginternational.org There is a free introductory workshop (one hour) on Saturday, September 14 at 7:00 a.m. pacific Writing from your body FII workshopTidbit #2: Open rate and engagement rate on mailing list is more important than the size of the mailing list.
Segment 3 (Mindset-Craft-Biz Check):
Segment 4 (Main Topic):
Next episode: Jeanne Blasberg on Story Retellings
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Resources:
"How to write an eavesdropping scene" on Erick's blog
Reading Critique Group for Writers FB Group (Jennie Komp's group)
3 Bird View FB page (Jennie Komp's business page)
Author XP (marketing for authors) (bi-monthly promotions)
Raven Publicity (publicity for authors)
The Shades of Orange (Rachel, Book Blogger on YouTube) for book recommendations SF/Fantasy/Horror
Contact Erick for business-starting advice or building a website.
Contact Valerie for author coaching.
Thomas Umstattd Jr, at Novel Marketing Podcast. Ep255: How to Create an Email Onboarding Drip Campaign
Russell P. Nohelty and Monica Leonelle's book, Get Your Book Selling on Kickstarter.
Balance meditation app.
Story Rubric version 1.1 and podcast episode. Three Story Method worksheetBook Recs for writing/creativity/business:
Thinking in Pictures by John Sayles Take Off Your Pants: Outline Your Books for Faster, Better Writing by Libbie Hawker Story Hypothesis: A Writer's Guide to Crafting Resonating Stories by JP Rindfleisch IX Fast-Draft Your Memoir: Write Your Life Story in 45 Hours by Rachael Herron Three Story Method: Foundations in Fiction by J.Thorn and Zach Bohannon The Anatomy of a Best Seller by Sacha Black Slow Productivity by Cal Newport -
Announcements:
2024 Writer Craft Writing Retreat and Workshop registration open; https://valerieihsan.com/retreat (Day Passes $400) I've got four spaces left. I have decided that because of the Costa Rica move next year, I will NOT be having a retreat in 2025. So, if you've been on the fence, NOW is the time to make the decision to purchase a ticket for this month. Part of my Burnout Recovery Series on Patreon now includes the addition of The Artist's Way. I'll be hosting a "Creative Cluster" via Zoom, starting Aug 8, (tomorrow!) Thursday, 10am-noon Pacific. It's a 12 week program only for my patrons, so go over and pick out any of the tiers. You'd need to attend live for how the sharing and caring is done, and there will not be replays. Instead, for those that can't attend live, I'll be posting in the Patron Community about my growth and inviting you to share yours in the comments. What's your experience with The Artist's Way? Three Story Method: Writing How-To Books out now. Focus and Finish: Goal-Setting and Strategic Planning for Writers (First in Series; out now.) Black Springs Saga Book 1 out now (it's the prequel) 99 cents (Accidental Stranger Book 2 preorder this coming week) SWWC and Write in the Harbor (Erick teaching.) (Valerie will be at Write on the Sound in Gig Harbor, WA this year, too! And also speaking at Alaska Writers Guild conference in Anchorage in October.) Host of Ghost Story Weekend for Wordcrafters. (Erick)Author Update:
Erick:
Valerie: getting ready for the retreat Working with my Burnout Recovery plan; Updates through my Patreon page. I'm reading: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman and Welcome to the Hyunam-Dong Bookshop by Huang Bo-Reum. Just finished: A Certain Kind of Starlight by Heather Webber. Thunder Song by Sasha taqŵšeblu LaPointe The Entire Sky by Joe WilkinsErick:
Becky is reading: Annie Ernaux's "A Woman's Story" and "A Man's Place"
Notes:
Main Topic starts at: 11:42
Becky Ellis is a Timberwolf Pup. The
daughter of a highly decorated
World War II combat sergeant, she
is a veteran of a war fought at home. She earned a BA
in English Literature at UC Berkeley and has over
twenty years of experience in the publishing industry.
She teaches writing in Portland, Oregon, where she
lives, plays, and has raised three daughters. Little
Avalanches is her debut memoir. https://instagram.com/beckyellisauthor
Won Rubery Book Award 2024.
1. Did you yoga or write first? Yoga came first. Part of the process of getting into my body. Writers live in our heads. Yoga kept me body aware. Start feel yourself. Accesses to feel your feelings. Access internal world in more embodied way. Bad Acting = Facial Expressions. Get on the Body. Get off the face. Exercise: close eyes and feel everything.
2. How did writing impact your healing? Transformational impact as a person. Understanding my father, saw them separate from me. See myself for the first time. Writing from the child's perspective. A lot of inner-child work. Consciously explore my own reasons for doing what. Study of the self = memoir. Putting your characters IN the story. Concrete sensory details. Have access to that place.
3. Talk a little about the fears memoirists have around writing about their family. Any tips or guidelines? And how does that feed into breaking cycles of silence and secret-keeping?
So important to get the stories on the page. Be a Just God on the page. Give everyone their reasons for doing what they did. Take a step back, and ask Why they did it. Shifts out of victimhood. People want to be seen and felt. Everyone was totally fine with it. Take time to figure out why they did it.
4. Your media kit mentions Trauma Bounce (bouncing back from the trauma). What should we be on the lookout for when writing and getting retriggered? Spent half the time crying. Strategies: therapy while writing, yoga, find safety where you can.
Exercise for memoirists: Highlight all the exposition. Get rid of all the the exposition and repetition. You can thread it back in afterwards.
5 How can wisdom come through action? Show it in the character arc, actions at end of story different than at the beginning.
So many objects in rough drafts. Use them for metaphor. Don't mine your life, mine your page.
Positive side to trauma. Try and try and try. "If you quit, you'll die." Train to survive. Feel so powerful in the end.
Writing to be in service to the reader. What are we in service to? The reader. What psychological practice can we share with the reader?
Structure of book to manipulating reader's emotions.
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Announcements:
2024 Writer Craft Writing Retreat and Workshop registration open; https://valerieihsan.com/retreat (Day Passes $400) I've got four spaces left. Burnout Recovery Series on Patreon, and part of my recovery is the addition of The Artist's Way. I'll be hosting a creative cluster via Zoom, starting Aug 8, Thursday, 10am-noon Pacific. It's a 12 week program, AND a bonus cluster meeting next week on the 1st to go over the intro and basic tools. Only for my patrons, so go over and pick out a tier. You'd need to attend live for how the sharing and caring is done, and there will not be replays. Instead, for those that can't attend live, I'll be posting in the Patron Community about my growth and inviting you to share yours in the comments. What's your experience with The Artist's Way? I'm reading: Four Thousand Weeks: Time Management for Mortals by Oliver Burkeman. And A Certain Kind of Starlight by Heather Webber. Thunder Song by Sasha taqŵšeblu LaPointe The Entire Sky by Joe Wilkins -
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Announcements:
2024 Writer Craft Writing Retreat and Workshop registration open; https://valerieihsan.com/retreat (Day Passes $400) Three Story Method: Writing How-To Books out now. Focus and Finish: Goal-Setting and Strategic Planning for Writers (First in Series; out now.) Black Springs Saga Book 1 out now (it's the prequel) 99 cents (Accidental Stranger Book 2 preorder this coming week) SWWC and Write in the Harbor (Erick teaching.) (Valerie will be at Write in the Harbor this year, too!) Host of Ghost Story Weekend for Wordcrafters. (Erick)Author Update:
Erick:
Valerie: back much better (still stiff) and knee improving, but slow; seeing the need to focus on my health needs (physical and mental) speaking Alaska Writers Guild conference in Anchorage in October and Write on the Sound in Gig Harbor, WA in November. Working with my Burnout Recovery plan; Updates through my Patreon page. I'm reading: (Gina's Reads) "But Everyone Feels This Way" Paige Layle - memoir on autism diagnosis; "Quit" Annie Duke Thunder Song by Sasha taqŵšeblu LaPointe The Entire Sky by Joe WilkinsErick:
Notes:
Main Topic starts at 17:25.
https://ginasoldano.com/author-spotlight-valerie-ihsan/ (Valerie's Author Spotlight feature on Gina's blog)
Getting to the Heart of Why We Write (Gina's podcast)
The Curious Compassionate (marketing podcast for children's books) with currated booklist
Nia's Rescue Box (50% of profits go to Colorado Food Rescue)
Food Rescue U.S. (national)
Noise cancelling headphones
Writing short
Organized folders in Google and date every document (DATETitle.docx)
Type with thumbs.
Know what project I'm working on.
Think about it first (a lot).
Leave the sentence open (notes for rest of scene).
Prefer writing memoir or essays and middle-grade fantasy (faves), but picture books are easy right now for those stolen moments.
Writing in multiple genres not a choice. Have stories and ideas in brain. Have to get them out. Direction of energy is career and curiosity led. Focusing on picture book and middle grade (rather than memoir and novels) right now.
Would like to be more focused in my direction: querying and direct submissions.
Drafting emails and query moments during the screaming moments. Admin on laptop at couch.
Things that work for me:
Grace. Bullet journaling. Lists on post-it notes, less stressful to move the list than rewriting the list on a new day.
Daydreaming and stickers.
The Practice by Seth Godin (Your work needs to rhyme with itself.)
Ginasoldano.com
Podcast, all the socials, IG @gina.soldano, Substack, (check out new Core Connected Marketing/Substack)
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Resources:
"How to write an eavesdropping scene" on Erick's blog
Reading Critique Group for Writers FB Group (Jennie Komp's group)
3 Bird View FB page (Jennie Komp's business page)
Author XP (marketing for authors) (bi-monthly promotions)
Raven Publicity (publicity for authors)
The Shades of Orange (Rachel, Book Blogger on YouTube) for book recommendations SF/Fantasy/Horror
Contact Erick for business-starting advice or building a website.
Contact Valerie for author coaching.
Thomas Umstattd Jr, at Novel Marketing Podcast. Ep255: How to Create an Email Onboarding Drip Campaign
Russell P. Nohelty and Monica Leonelle's book, Get Your Book Selling on Kickstarter.
Balance meditation app.
Story Rubric version 1.1 and podcast episode. Three Story Method worksheetBook Recs for writing/creativity/business:
Thinking in Pictures by John Sayles Take Off Your Pants: Outline Your Books for Faster, Better Writing by Libbie Hawker Story Hypothesis: A Writer's Guide to Crafting Resonating Stories by JP Rindfleisch IX Fast-Draft Your Memoir: Write Your Life Story in 45 Hours by Rachael Herron Three Story Method: Foundations in Fiction by J.Thorn and Zach Bohannon The Anatomy of a Best Seller by Sacha Black Slow Productivity by Cal Newport -
Listener comment: suggestion to timestamp if the video is about a specific thing (Main Topic starts at 24:58)
Announcements:
PNW inspired horror [email protected]; Submissions closed. Reading stories now. 2024 Writer Craft Writing Retreat and Workshop registration open; https://valerieihsan.com/retreat (Day Passes $400) Three Story Method: Writing How-To Books out now. Focus and Finish: Goal-Setting and Strategic Planning for Writers (First in Series; out now.) Black Springs Saga Book 1 out now (it's the prequel) 99 cents (Accidental Stranger Book 2 preorder this coming week) SWWC and Write in the Harbor (Erick teaching.) (Valerie will be at Write in the Harbor this year, too!) Host of Ghost Story Weekend for Wordcrafters. (Erick) featured on KBOO radio (link coming soon)Author Update:
Erick:
launched new book series (Black Springs Saga) writing and client work list of short stories for the summer Valerie: back much better (still stiff) and knee improving, but slow (ultrasound tomorrow); seeing the need to focus on my health needs (physical and mental) speaking Alaska Writers Guild conference in Anchorage in October and Write on the Sound in Gig Harbor, WA in November. Working with my Burnout Recovery plan; Updates through my Patreon page. I'm reading: Thunder Song by Sasha taqŵšeblu LaPointe In a Dark, Dark Wood by Ruth Ware The Manor House Governess by C.A. CastleErick:
Cold Victory by Karl Marlantes You Like it Darker Stephen King Anders Fager "Grandma's Journey" Swedish Cults (HP Lovecraft on acid)Notes:
Imagery can be intimidating if you think it has to be beautiful, flowery, lurid, prose. Think more realistic expectations.
It's a tool. Imagery as tone setting. Character interacting with environment. Relevant to the action. More vivid images.
Use concrete sensory images to "explain" feelings.
Get unique with imagery. Use different senses besides visual.
Layer senses. Work in reverse in heightened scenes (tactile first?). Maximize effect. Cinematic thing. Sound cue, reaction cue, visual cue.
Cliches come from not having a grasp of a moment or character when use simile. Remember to use character's POV, not yours. Metaphor is more powerful than simile, often. Imagery progresses from simile to metaphor (personal style choice), character development. Using the old comparisons to make sense of the new thing, but as they continue exploring the new, it becomes more metaphor than simile.
The movie in my head will always be different than the reader's movie.
Set up imagery so the reader is allowed to watch their own movie.
Co-create with your reader.
Find the balance. Fresh but familiar.
Imagery can be (should be?) intentional. Happy accidents. ;-) What's new and unique? How can I riff on that?
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Main Topic: Discovery Writing with KimBoo York
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PNW inspired horror [email protected]; Submissions closed. Reading stories now. Garden Home Community Library Writers Series "Self Publishing Success" June 25 gardenhomelibrary.org 2024 Writer Craft Writing Retreat and Workshop registration open; https://valerieihsan.com/retreat (Day Passes $400) Three Story Method: Writing How-To Books out now. Focus and Finish: Goal-Setting and Strategic Planning for Writers (First in Series) Focus and Finish Group Coaching Cohort Black Springs Saga Book 1 out now (it's the prequel) 99 cents (Accidental Stranger Book 2 preorder this coming week)Author Update:
Erick:
launched new book series (Black Springs Saga) June 21st, Importance of Telling Your Story. 90.7 FM KBOO Erick 9am-10am frustrated with the stories coming in (writers are not listening to submission requirements) Valerie: injured, humping along speaking Alaska Writers Guild conference in October Moose's Tooth Pizza (Erick recommends I eat there.) I'm reading: Thunder Song by Sasha taqŵšeblu LaPointeErick:
Cold Victory by Karl MarlantesKimBoo York is reading: Nirvana in Fire (English translation) (This is the graphic novel/manga version.)
Notes:
Writing fan fiction helped [KimBoo] come into her own voice and writing process.
Discovery writing is a technique.
Leaning into your curiosity.
Writing into the Dark (Dean Wesley Smith)
Can intuitive writers use it?
Dear Writer, Are you intuitive? Becca Syme.
Instinct comes in.
Study and practice = intuition
Discovery writers lean on intuition heavily. New writers may have a hard time with discovery writing until they practice.
After one million words, you will discover your writing style.
Discovery writing as improve "Yes And" -- leaning on knowledge.
Not free association writing. Writing into your curiosity (guard rails, not stream of consciousness). Going on the journey with the character.
Don't get stuck on what "should" happen. Just follow the curve as it goes around.
Start small. Practice.
Discovery writing before the page (Erick).
Write out of order.
Reverse story beats, reverse outline.
How can you use this in nonfiction or blog posts and essays?
YES. A different process.
Nonfiction: Start with the introduction. Choose sentences to pull out as a section header. Move things around in manuscript for flow. Writing it out is what helps her (KimBoo) understand the organization.
First draft or second is not the finished product.
Do this with your marketing! Take two days to do it and stay curious.
Stay curious until it's done.
Purposely leave holes so readers will be curious and explore.
Plug: houseofyork.info
By the Seat of Your Pants: Secrets of Discovery Writing
One Million Words Club on Discord (productivity, mindset)
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Resources:
"How to write an eavesdropping scene" on Erick's blog
Reading Critique Group for Writers FB Group (Jennie Komp's group)
3 Bird View FB page (Jennie Komp's business page)
Author XP (marketing for authors) (bi-monthly promotions)
Raven Publicity (publicity for authors)
The Shades of Orange (Rachel, Book Blogger on YouTube) for book recommendations SF/Fantasy/Horror
Contact Erick for business-starting advice or building a website.
Contact Valerie for author coaching.
Thomas Umstattd Jr, at Novel Marketing Podcast. Ep255: How to Create an Email Onboarding Drip Campaign
Russell P. Nohelty and Monica Leonelle's book, Get Your Book Selling on Kickstarter.
Balance meditation app.
Story Rubric version 1.1 and podcast episode. Three Story Method worksheetBook Recs for writing/creativity/business:
Thinking in Pictures by John Sayles
Take Off Your Pants: Outline Your Books for Faster, Better Writing by Libbie Hawker Story Hypothesis: A Writer's Guide to Crafting Resonating Stories by JP Rindfleisch IX Fast-Draft Your Memoir: Write Your Life Story in 45 Hours by Rachael Herron Three Story Method: Foundations in Fiction by J.Thorn and Zach Bohannon The Anatomy of a Best Seller by Sacha Black Slow Productivity by Cal Newport -
Main Topic: Using Tropes to Avoid Writer's Block
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Announcements:
PNW inspired horror [email protected]; Submissions closed. Garden Home Community Library Writers Series "Self Publishing Success" June 25 gardenhomelibrary.org 2024 Writer Craft Writing Retreat and Workshop registration open; https://valerieihsan.com/retreat Three Story Method: Writing How-To Books out now. Focus and Finish: Goal-Setting and Strategic Planning for Writers (First in Series) Exploring Imagery in Creative Nonfiction Black Springs Saga Book 1 out now (it's the prequel) 99 centsAuthor Update:
Erick:
launched new book series (Black Springs Saga) Valerie: new class good (planning on repurposing the content) I'm reading: Crow Talk by Eileen Garvin Thunder Song by Sasha taqŵšeblu LaPointeErick:
The Manitou by Graham MastertonNotes:
Use the tropes to get started.
The obligatory scenes are already outlined for you.
You can definitely make it your own. It's not cheating.
Read in your genre. Understand the tropes in your genre. (Deconstruct books you love so you can learn to write that way. Read: The Anatomy of a Best Seller by Sacha Black.
Make an Id List to discover your favorite tropes.
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Valerie’s Facebook Page and Instagram account
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Erick’s free book on Ghostwriting: https://dl.bookfunnel.com/cexki4kp5n
Erick’s Author Site: https://erickmertzauthor.com
Erick’s Facebook Page and Instagram account
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Resources:
"How to write an eavesdropping scene" on Erick's blog
Reading Critique Group for Writers FB Group (Jennie Komp's group)
3 Bird View FB page (Jennie Komp's business page)
Author XP (marketing for authors) (bi-monthly promotions)
Raven Publicity (publicity for authors)
The Shades of Orange (Rachel, Book Blogger on YouTube) for book recommendations SF/Fantasy/Horror
Contact Erick for business-starting advice or building a website.
Contact Valerie for author coaching.
Thomas Umstattd Jr, at Novel Marketing Podcast. Ep255: How to Create an Email Onboarding Drip Campaign
Russell P. Nohelty and Monica Leonelle's book, Get Your Book Selling on Kickstarter.
Balance meditation app.
Story Rubric version 1.1 and podcast episode. Three Story Method worksheetBook Recs for writing/creativity/business:
Thinking in Pictures by John Sayles
Take Off Your Pants: Outline Your Books for Faster, Better Writing by Libbie Hawker Story Hypothesis: A Writer's Guide to Crafting Resonating Stories by JP Rindfleisch IX Fast-Draft Your Memoir: Write Your Life Story in 45 Hours by Rachael Herron Three Story Method: Foundations in Fiction by J.Thorn and Zach Bohannon The Anatomy of a Best Seller by Sacha Black Slow Productivity by Cal Newport -
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PNW inspired horror [email protected]; Submissions open until stories filled, or May 31st. 2024 Writer Craft Writing Retreat and Workshop registration open; https://valerieihsan.com/retreat Three Story Method: Writing How-To Books out now. Focus and Finish: Goal-Setting and Strategic Planning for Writers (First in Series) Exploring Imagery in Creative Nonfiction Submissions class June 25th in Portland area. Link TBA. (Taught by Erick.)Patron comment:
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Author Update:
Erick:
prepping for new class launched new book series (Black Springs Saga) went camping with son (Cub Scouts) writing new story (TV pilot) (using as a sample for ghostwriting website) Valerie: started teaching new class mastermind helping me make some decisions getting ready for LeslieSophia changing website to streamline and point to coach I'm reading: Crow Talk by Eileen Garvin Thunder Song by Sasha taqŵšeblu LaPointeErick:
Werewolf anthology Ten Things I Learned from Bill Porter by Shelly Brady HT to Survive a Garden Gnome Attack by Chuck Sambuchino Homicide (GN based on The Wire) by David Simon One Tough Mother by Gert BoyleNotes:
Single use content is labor intensive.
Blog --> YT video, marketing material on various sites, podcast talking points.
Podcast episode --> YT video, social media, newsletter, public newsletter.
Think about the purpose of the work you do. Harmonious message. Expert in field.
Different video lengths serve different scenarios for your audience.
Takes more than one time before they click on your content and engage with you.
Look at HOW to use it, and where.
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Resources:
"How to write an eavesdropping scene" on Erick's blog
Reading Critique Group for Writers FB Group (Jennie Komp's group)
3 Bird View FB page (Jennie Komp's business page)
Author XP (marketing for authors) (bi-monthly promotions)
Raven Publicity (publicity for authors)
The Shades of Orange (Rachel, Book Blogger on YouTube) for book recommendations SF/Fantasy/Horror
Contact Erick for business-starting advice or building a website.
Contact Valerie for author coaching.
Thomas Umstattd Jr, at Novel Marketing Podcast. Ep255: How to Create an Email Onboarding Drip Campaign
Russell P. Nohelty and Monica Leonelle's book, Get Your Book Selling on Kickstarter.
Balance meditation app.
Story Rubric version 1.1 and podcast episode. Three Story Method worksheetBook Recs for writing/creativity/business:
Thinking in Pictures by John Sayles
Take Off Your Pants: Outline Your Books for Faster, Better Writing by Libbie Hawker Story Hypothesis: A Writer's Guide to Crafting Resonating Stories by JP Rindfleisch IX Fast-Draft Your Memoir: Write Your Life Story in 45 Hours by Rachael Herron Three Story Method: Foundations in Fiction by J.Thorn and Zach Bohannon -
Main Topic: Author A.B. Herron on writing cross-genre with dyslexia
Amanda is passionate about discussing the realities of being an indie author while being dyslexic, straddling the fantasy and romance genres, the importance of highlighting sex positivity in our society, and the impact her background in anatomy and zoology has on her magic systems and world building.
PATREON:
Thank you to our existing patrons for believing in our work offline and here in the podcast.
Become a patron of the arts at Patreon.com/valerieihsan for books, writing instruction, coaching, and planning. Go to Patreon.com/strangeairstories for short stories in the paranormal mystery genre.
Announcements:
PNW inspired horror [email protected]; Submissions open until stories filled. Starting to read May 1st. 2024 Writer Craft Writing Retreat and Workshop registration open; https://valerieihsan.com/retreat Three Story Method: Writing How-To Books out now. Focus and Finish: Goal-Setting and Strategic Planning for Writers (First in Series) Exploring Imagery in Creative NonfictionPatron comment:
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Questions from listeners:
Author Update:
Erick:
Valerie: sick last week wrote lesson plans in bed I'm reading: Crow Talk by Eileen Garvin Thunder Song by Sasha taqŵšeblu LaPointe Slow Productivity by Cal NewportAmanda is reading comfort books right now: Arrows of the Queen series.
Scent of the Missing: Love and Partnership with a Search-and-Rescue Dog by Susannah Charleson
Erick:
Notes:
A.B. Heron is a dyslexic author residing in the Pacific Northwest. She works full time, writes in the cracks between responsibilities, and plays with dogs because she just can’t help herself. For more insights into what make her fantasy stories flourish, follow her on Instagram @a.b.herron or check out her website www.abherron.com
Tip: If you have a Barnes and Noble near you, walk in and say you are a local indie author and ask if they are doing author signing.
Writes adult urban fantasy, romantasy, paranormal romance. Elemental World Series (two books now, third coming this year, 5 total in series).
Dyslexia was a barrier to being a writer only emotionally. Looked for strong technical editors. Spelling and word choice are struggles. Name recall is hard.
Showed original work to trusted people, started getting positive responses, showed little bits at a time. "I can write, just not spell. The distinction was powerful for me. I am smart." Not barriers; just work arounds. Used a small press that didn't keep the rights. They help you make a book. Luminare Press.
Vellum dyslexia font choice: 1 in 5 people with dyslexia, fonts don't make it easier to read for all people. Font doesn't slow Amanda down. Ask your readers if they want a paperback with a font designed for dyslexic readers.
Need magic systems to make sense with science background. Looking at the anatomy of humans and canines. Build physical laws into magic systems. How water or energy works, conservation of matter. HOW does it work?
Wished she'd maybe finished writing series before publishing.
Learn as you go. IG book community very supportive. Tripped into publishing.
Abherron.com
Instagram a.b.herron
Books available at Amazon and Barnes and Noble
Coffee Fueled Stories Podcast, Ep with A.B. Herron
Amanda is signing at Hot and Steamy Romance Writers in Portland '24 event.
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